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Aug. 13th, 2003 03:05 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccastareyesMade my first post to that HP RPG. No answers yet. I also had a dentist appointment yesterday -- no cavities, but my teeth hurt for a while. *Gloats -- her sister had 2*
My site is down... remind me to get a hold of Kevin and complan... I like knowing my webmaster IRL.
Okay, a writing problem. One of my stories is written in what can be seen as an odd POV -- namely that I switch POVs every chapter, between two first-person POVs (from female lead to male lead to female to... well, you get the idea). However, I realize this can be confusing. So, I'm trying to figure out what the heck to do about it. I need the male lead's POV, as I need his perspective. But, I also need the female lead's POV, as 1)I like the beginning I wrote with her
and 2)The male lead spends most of a chapter unconscious/near-dead, making a rewrite with him as the consistent narrator impossible.
I aksed![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
yuuo, but she said she doesn't normally deal with 1st person POV. My current best idea is to rewrite the female lead's parts into third person POV, making things that much clearer.
Opinions? I really want to get a rewrite done, both for my site and so I can start asking if my fic can be archived elsewhere besides the big places (ff.net and mm.org). I like being read.
My site is down... remind me to get a hold of Kevin and complan... I like knowing my webmaster IRL.
Okay, a writing problem. One of my stories is written in what can be seen as an odd POV -- namely that I switch POVs every chapter, between two first-person POVs (from female lead to male lead to female to... well, you get the idea). However, I realize this can be confusing. So, I'm trying to figure out what the heck to do about it. I need the male lead's POV, as I need his perspective. But, I also need the female lead's POV, as 1)I like the beginning I wrote with her
and 2)The male lead spends most of a chapter unconscious/near-dead, making a rewrite with him as the consistent narrator impossible.
I aksed
yuuo, but she said she doesn't normally deal with 1st person POV. My current best idea is to rewrite the female lead's parts into third person POV, making things that much clearer. Opinions? I really want to get a rewrite done, both for my site and so I can start asking if my fic can be archived elsewhere besides the big places (ff.net and mm.org). I like being read.
