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beccastareyesBeta Report:
I got through one page. So far Haruka and Michiru seme in character, but we've just now gotten to the crossover bit. The author has a few repeating grammar mistakes (mostly funny dialouge and their/there/they're and it's/its mistakes). But the crossover will make or break the story.
Tomorrow is Hell day. I hate Wednesdays.
I got through one page. So far Haruka and Michiru seme in character, but we've just now gotten to the crossover bit. The author has a few repeating grammar mistakes (mostly funny dialouge and their/there/they're and it's/its mistakes). But the crossover will make or break the story.
Tomorrow is Hell day. I hate Wednesdays.
