Wow....
Nice response time... I posted a story to Fictionpress -- think ff.net for original stories and I got a review within a couple of hours:
Excellent descriptions in the begining and sad at the end, all the way through
it was a Exceptional short story. One of the best I've ever read
The story was a science fiction romance that ended with the couple breaking up. I was worried I'd get the immature 'gr8 fic, wrt more plz kthnxbai!' and other stuff assuming I hadn't meant the story to end 'sadly'. Sweet.
The story is called "Faces", by the way. You can read it from my fictionpress profile.
Nice response time... I posted a story to Fictionpress -- think ff.net for original stories and I got a review within a couple of hours:
Excellent descriptions in the begining and sad at the end, all the way through
it was a Exceptional short story. One of the best I've ever read
The story was a science fiction romance that ended with the couple breaking up. I was worried I'd get the immature 'gr8 fic, wrt more plz kthnxbai!' and other stuff assuming I hadn't meant the story to end 'sadly'. Sweet.
The story is called "Faces", by the way. You can read it from my fictionpress profile.